Jan Černý

posted on 8 Aug 2000
Lucie, že noci upije
ale na sperma se dusí
přesto se nesměje
a tiše to zkusí

Lucie, bledá jako stěna
ale nikdy nic neříká
když padá na kolena
a potom polyká
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